This that prefers action verbs. This that writes. “This that” will have to do away with.
Remember memorizing villanelles to recite to your brain to slow it. Appropriately obsessive compulsive. Auden and Bishop as weapons.
As a child took to fight image with word and that quiet order of repetition.
Behind this: entryway, unguarded. Instead of this, exacting and precise.
Not to draw up the plan but to write the plan. There is a literal problem of geography that is complicated by chronology.
The outline isn’t sharp, enough, yet. This/that is throwaway. This that is everything.